Friday, July 1, 2011

Page 10, Panel 1

17 comments:

Heckboy said...

Death Rangers are by nature unstable and hard to manage.

PENICKart said...

That. Is. Hi-larious!! I was so hoping this is where you'd take it. I was hoping you'd have the one guy shoot the other, but this is better. You really made me laugh here; made my day. :-)

Heckboy said...

Hahah...thanks. I thought about shooting him too, but it was more in character to have the ranger just go off like a loose canon and attack the guy. I love that the other rangers egg him on...I figure life is cheap when one's a Death Ranger.

-Chris

DADICUS said...

NEVER LAUGHED SO HARD EVER AT A COMIC PANEL!!!!!!

Heckboy said...

Heh...you guys are too kind.

Chris

Ben Perkins said...

Awesome. I love it. But..did the other two rangers change color? Just curious for continuity sake.

Heckboy said...

Ben, your wish is my command. I like to play with lighting and don't like to be so literal, but this looks good too.

:)

Chris

PENICKart said...

I like the changes better. It not only helps with continuity but also makes the other rangers pop more; it reads more clearly now. I also like the yellow word balloons.

Heckboy said...

Thanks, Mike. I think more in terms of design than realism...maybe to a fault. The ye goes to the highest point of contrast first, so that's why I wanted my crazy Ranger to pop forward. With the word balloons, it not only gives them added emphasis to make them yellow, it balances out the panel with warm and cool elements.

In retrospect, maybe I shouldn't have taken a half measure with the coloring...if i went for it like in the old EC comics...all yellow and orange for impact or a blue BG and yellow characters, it might have been more successful. Live and learn!

Chris

PENICKart said...

Has no one called dibs on this yet!? I so want to but I'm too busy and I don't want to have the same two people going back and forth for too long, you know? Who's going to get the ball rolling again?

Ryan Cody said...

Tight deadline this week is killing me. Maybe I can jump in next week. I'd like to see Abe get re-addressed though.

Scott Godlewski said...

Mutha fuckin' dibs!

Heckboy said...

Finally! I was afraid that I had maybe killed the improv! :)

-Chris

PENICKart said...

Scott! Scott? Three-P-Oh? Where could he be? Is he dead? Did the death ranger kill Scott by accident? Our adventures has stalled and can't get up. Pop that clutch and get up into second gear, man! I'm jonesing for the next panel!!!

PENICKart said...

Get "us" into second gear. Damn my bad spelling...

Scott Godlewski said...

Tonight. I promise. Sorry, fellas.

Ryan Cody said...

Okay Improvers, here is the deal. Scotty's having some computer problems so I am going to color, letter and post his page tomorrow morning. It's a slight delay, but I've seen his b/w panel and it sets us up for a great second half for Abe.